NEED HELP

So I have this new story that I have started writing and I need some help on it and I would to publish it up here and on another site

So if anybody is interested please e-mail me at:

netta1566@gmail.com 

The Move

So the past few days has been going great for Shawn and Bey until one day they went out to the park with Brooke and sat and talked and played with her and decided to head back to Bey's house. When they got their Bey unlocked the door and opened it and tried to turn on the light and they didn't come on


Damn it

Bey what's wrong

The the the lights are off

You haven't paid the bill

"No haven't paid anything now that i think about it, it was due the day you called me and that same day i got laid off. I'm just glad that I didn't need anything for her" she said smiling at a sleeping Brooke

"But eventually she going to need something and when that time comes I won't be able to get get it. This is just all frustrating."

"Bey calm down I can help you she's my daughter too, whatever she needs I'll get it until you can get back on your feet ok, I'll take care of the bills t-"

"Shawn I can't let you do that"

"But I want to, I'll do anything for my girls you should know that by now well how about this yall come stay with me until you at least get back on your feet what do you say"

"i don't know"

"just say yes"

 "i guess it wouldn't hurt"

"so is that a yes"

 "yes"

 ok well get some clothes for you and Brooke and i'll be down here waiting

shawn was wondering what was taking bey so long and when she finally came down stairs he saw why she had three luggages and a baby bag.

"Are you all set to go?"

"Yes"

"Well let's get going"

Beyoncé grabbed the Brooke and Shawn grabbed the bags. Bey locked the door and made her way tho the car.

Now they were in the car on there way. It was silent in the car that only the radio could be heard but it wasn't an award silence it was more comfortable.

Once they arrived Bey looked out the window and everything seemed familiar

"Shawn why does this place feel so familiar?"

"That's because you have been here before."

"When?"

"The night we went on our date"

"What?"

"Remember when we dropped Brooke off at my mom's house"

"Yea." She then looked once more at the scene an seen the familiar house with the rose bushes. "You do not live across the street from mama."

"What can i say it makes her feel."

Shawn gets Bey's and Brooke's bags and carries them in as she gets the car seat

When she enters the house
she is blow away

"This is a really nice house you have, how many bedrooms?"

"Three"

"Wow"

"I know you're tired because i am so I'll show you the rooms"

Shawn showed her the rooms and let her pick which one she wanted

After that everybody settled down for a nap

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I'm sorry yall but the past few weeks have been hectic and I'm not sure when the next up but I'm TRY and aim for nxt Friday

The Morning After

Bey woke up to Shawn's light snores then she started to remember last night and a smile grew on her face then she kissed he on the the lips he stirred a little bit, then she carefully moved his arm from around her so she could do her morning routine. She was successful. She brushed her teeth and washed her face then cut on the shower and let it get to the right temperature then got in three min into her her shower she felt arms wrap around her and she jumped a little



"Sorry baby I didn't mean to scare you"


"Its OK but why you in here?"


"I woke up and I was alone so I went searching an that's when I heard the
shower going so I decided to join you"


"So you missed me"


"mhmm yea we missed you a lot"


"How much did y'all me miss me"


"I can show better than I can tell you"


"Really"


"Yup now give me my kisses"


 "So demanding"

She went and pecked him and  Shawn was not having that he went and kissed her again but this time more passionately and with force and then they slowly part and look into each others eyes

   "You know what I wanna do now" she said as turns their bodies toward the wall facing the shower curtain and whispering


"No what"


"Get out the shower and put on some"


"Put on what Bey"


 "clothes" she said after she got out the shower


"Now what am I suppose to do about this


"Why don't you take a nice cold shower o heard that helps" she started to laugh 


"Ima get you back to when you least suspect it" 


 "yea whatever, but can you hurry up I'm ready to see my baby"


 "OK give me ten min since you wouldn't help me with my little problem"


"Get over it you big baby and hurry up"

After Shawn got out the shower he got dressed and him and Bey got in the car and headed to his mom's house. On the way the car the car was silent except the music coming from the radio then Shawn spoke up 



"Hey bey"


 "Yes"


 "When is Brook's Birthday?"


 "June 24th, why are you asking me now?" 


"Because I just wanted to know she's my daughter too and it would be nice to know her birthday" 


 "Okay so why didn't you ask me this earlier I don't know I just I got caught up with seeing you again and it really didn't think about it at the moment. oh okay I know that you haven't spent much time with her so i would you like to spend sometime with us tonight" 


 "That'll be cool"


"Really Shawn!?"


"What?"


"Nothing"


 TBC...... This is just something to hold until next update. Sorry So Short

The Date (Part ll)

 Sorry for the delay guys this chap is longer than the rest hope you enjoy and COMMENT below 



After she hung up the phone she went upstairs and laid out her clothes and got her rag and

 towel to go shower since Brooke was sleep and she was already dressed for the day. She 

hoped in the shower then hopped back 5 min later out since he was going to be there in less than an 

hour. She lotion herself then put on her  matching underwear and then put on her yellow  

form fitting dress then did her hair in a simple ponytail. Put on very little make-up, After that she got 

Brooke's baby bag together and by time she put Brooke in her car  seat their was a knock at the door. 

"Who is it??" she said laughing knowing exactly who it was 

"Man bey open up the door" he said laughing 

"OK I'm coming" she said and opened up the door and let Shawn in  

"You ready" he said stepping in the door

"Yea can you get her while I get my purse and her bag?" 

"Yea" 



After bey got the baby bag and her purse she locked the door and headed for Shawn's car he was 

holding the car door open for her when she got there he grabbed the baby bag from her and and let her 

slide in the car before he carefully closed the door and put the baby bag in the back with a sleeping 

Brooke and then got in the car and drove off to his moms house


At Mama Gloria's House 


MG saw the headlights flash quickly in here living room window and knew that it was her son and 

before they could even get out the car she was already at the door 



"Hey son" she said



"Hey ma you remember Beyonce" he said



"Hey sugar how you been" she said



"I'm doing well and it nice to meet you again Ms.Carter" she said



"It was nice to meet you again too sweetie, not trying to be rude, but where is my grad baby?" she 

said looking excited to meet her granddaughter 


"Here she is" Shawn said as he brought her around to the front of the car with the diaper  bag on his 

arm 



"Oh my goodness she is so beautiful she reminds me of Shawn of when he was her age so sweet and 

innocent" she said



Bey an Shawn spent awhile at his mother's house to kill some time since she wasn't that far from 

where the café is, after a while they said their goodbyes and head to the cafe. Shawn pulled up to the 

cafe and and gets out and goes around to the other side and opens the door for her he closes the door 

and they walk in and find a place to sit and order there drinks and the order their food the chit chat then  

20 min later into their meal bey cuts to the chase 



"So what did you want to talk about?"

"Damn no Shawn how was your day just cut to the chase huh?"

"Yea pretty much, but how was your day?"


"Shawn same 'ol same 'ol same shit different day. how about you?"

"Same except for i got fired the other but its know biggie i got some interviews lined up hopefully one 

of them will snag me"


"That's what's up, but what i really bought you out here was talk about what happened the other day

and-"

"I know i should have told you, but how was i suppose to we broke up the week before i found out 

and you never called what was i gone say Shawn i want you stuff out my house and by the way I'm 

pregnant and its yours"



"I mean yea you Should've and I would've been there through it all but you chose to keep me out, but i

want to be in her life now and yours if you allow me bey its been miserable not having you by my side 

baby so what do you say will you take me back" gives bey the puppy dog eyes

"I don't Shawn"

"Please Bey please?" he said getting on his knees

"Can you please get up people are staring"

"Not until you say yes"

"If i say yes will you get up"

"So does that mean you'll take me back?"

"Yes now can you get up"

"Yes but can you help me up I'm to old to be doing this"

 "Yes I can" 


 When he got up he pit Bey in a lip lock, she was caught off guard a little bit then she kissed him back, then people stared clapping out of nowhere then they broke the kiss and Bey put her head in Shawn's shirt cause she was a little embarrassed then Shawn whispered in her ear 


 "You ready to go"


She shook her head yes Shawn left the money on the table then the left. The car ride was silent but not an awkward silence. they drove live this for another 5 mins before Shawn broke the silence 


"Do you want to go home cause we got another two hours before we have to pick up Brooke" 

 "Yea we could watch a movie or something" 

 "Ok" 


 Shawn heads to Bey's house when they get the Bey goes upstairs to change she puts on some grey sweatpants an a white tank top and sits on the couch next to Shawn 



 "So what movie do you wanna watch?" 

 "Don't know but it really doesn't matter to me"

 "Let's watch a movie on TV"

 "OK"


 Bey flips through the channels and sees Salt is on 


 "How about Salt?"

 "Yea that's my movie but its already playing"


"Yea but we can start it over"


 Bey gets up and goes to the kitchen


 "OK HOW"

"PRESS SELECT ON THE REMOTE THEN PAUSE IT"

 "OK"

 "Did you want some popcorn or candy"

 "yea I want some popcorn"

 "Hear you go now press play"

 
Bey made herself comfortable on Shawn's Chest and about midway through the movie she was sleep so Shawn turn off the TV and picked Bey up and carried her upstairs and tucked her in and kissed her forehead but when he was halfway out the door she called him 

"Shawn"

 "Yes Bey"

 "Don't go stay" 

"OK let me call my mama first OK"

 "OK" 


 Shawn called his mama and told her that they would pick Brooke up in the morning 


"OK ma love ya"

 "Love you to son bye"


"Bye"


 After he hung up the phone Shawn went back into the room with Bey an stripped down to his boxers and white T and got in the bed and wrapped his arm around Bey an she scooted closer to him and with the love his in his arms he soon went to sleep also 



 TBC..........

Sneak Peek

At mama Gloria's house 

MG saw the headlights flash quickly in here living room window and knew that it was her son and before they could even get out the car she was already at the door 

"Hey Son" she said

"Hey ma you remember Beyonce" he said

"Hey sugar how you been?" she said

"I'm doing well and its nice to meet you again Ms.Carter" she said

"It was nice to meet you again sweetie, not trying to be rude but where is grand baby" she said looking excited to meet her granddaughter.

"Here she is" Shawn said as he brought her around to the front of the car with the baby bag on his arm 

"Oh my goodness she is so beautiful she reminds me of Shawn of when he was her age so sweet and innocent" she said

Bey and Shawn spent awhile at his mother's house kill some time since she wasn't that far where the cafe is after a while they said their goodbyes and headed to the cafe. Shawn pulls up to the cafe and gets out and goes around to the side and open the door for her and they walk in and find a place to sit and order their drinks and then order their food bey sparked up a conversation 

"So what is it that you wanted to talk to me about?" she said 

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This is just to hold yall over until i finish the rest 

TBC...................

Hey Guys

The Next Post Will Be Up Some Time This Week It Depends Though

The Date (Part l)

What if I tell and he doesn't want anything to do with her. He’s not going to do that knowing whats its like growing up without one. You have to tell him he deserves to know and you don’t want her growing up without a father do you? No. ok then here goes nothing.

"Shawn Brooke is yours" she blurted out

There I said it. Why is he not saying anything back

"Shawn?!" 

He looked up at her shook his head he stood up shook his head once more and paid for his drink and left bey sat there with her head in her hands and looked at Brooke because she began to whine so she reached in the baby bag and got her bottle propped it up, after she finished Bey picked her up and burped her then put her back in her car seat and pulled tthe blanket over her and picked up the car seat and baby and went home and cried herself to sleep.                                                                                                                                                        

Next Morning

Bey woke up that morning to a tear stained pillow and wondered why then she remembered the the events that occurred and she started to tear but quickly wiped them away and she sat there in a trance for an hr until she heard whines through the baby monitor and got Brooke and brought here back to her room and turned on the TV and propped up pillows on the bed around Brooke and went to do her morning routine and when she finished she turn off the TV and got Brooke and headed downstairs so they could eat. She put brooke in her swing then she made  her way into the kitchen and got a bottle a bottle out the fridge that she had pumped and put it in the bottle warmer then looked in the freezer for something quick to eat and fast to make and she got a jimmy dean biscuit and heated it up an then went and got brooke's bottle out the warmer and tested it an put the bottle on the living room table an went to pick her up

"hey mommy's pretty baby ready to eat huh" 

Brooke started making baby noises bey then heard the timer on the microwave go off with Brooke still in her arms she made her way into the kitchen and got her food an brought it to the living room she feed Brooke before she ate the she burped her and put her down in her swing since she went back to sleep then she ate her food then she sat back and watched TV until she feel asleep also, the she woke 2hrs later to a phone call from Shawn she was hesitant at first an then pressed the talk button.

"hello" she said

:"um bey can we talk" he said

"yea whats up?" she said now sitting up

"no can we talk in person and not over the phone" he said

"OK what time you want to meet up and where" she said

"same place we meet up last time and in an hour" he said

"and where am i suppose to find a babysitter on such a short notice" she said

"well i talked to my mom and she said she'll watch her if that's OK with you" he said

"yea why wouldn't i be i mean she is her grandmother and she needs to be around more people  besides Kelly, mama, Solo and so on" she said 

"OK well ill be over there in a hr to pick yall up" he said

"OK bye" she said

After she hung up the phone she went upstairs and laid out her clothes and got her rag and towel to go shower since Brooke was sleep and she was already dressed for the day. She hoped in the shower then hopped back out since he was going to be there in less than an hour. She lotioned her self  then put on her  matching bra an panties and then put on her yellow form fitting dress then did her hair (which she didnt do much but put it in a ponytail). Put on very little make-up, After that she got Brooke's baby bag together and bye time she put Brooke in her car  seat their was a knock at the door 

"Who is it??" she said laughing knowing exactly who it was 

"Man bey open up the door" he said laughing 

"OK im coming" she said  

TBC... 

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